SPEECHLESS

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You have beautiful words and rythm, but you need to tie it together and shorten it for the reader's benefit, without losing the stream of consciousness, mystic feeling. Thanks for sharing your work.

Lucy

Lucy

Most people are not honest enough to be honest in their opinion. I Bow. I'd love to read you... a piece. But riddle me this, how many words does it take to capture that found in between lips touching? Send me a bird!

Silence

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wow I like the way it flows, I am sure reading it on paper and hearing it read out loud is somewhat of a different flow. I know my pieces are. It was "church" for me:) great read

I'm honored that you splashed yourself over a piece of me. If " Speechless" flowed with finesse it was because you infused it with that dynamic perspective that is you & transmitted my soulprint into your own journey. It isn't the poem that flows; it's you that flowed over & thru it. Thank you for decorating my work & I look forward to being invited into your "church" soon. Please join my main poetry joint.

peace

-Silence

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